shizu kasa ya iwa ni shimi iru semi no koe
piercing the rock
a cicada's voice
In my first anthology of my haiku, which was published in 1998 (on own account) I defined haiku as the poetry of silence and emptiness. I think that a lot of our fellow haijin (haiku poets) shall say the same of haiku.
Basho wrote haiku about stillness, emptiness and loneliness, as we already have seen in this series of essays. The above verse is, in my opinion, one of his best haiku with stillness as theme. The stillness of the mountains becomes very strong by the fragile voice of the cicada.
This verse is not based on reality, because a cicada's voice can't pierce a rock, but it works with what is felt (also a sense) and not with what is thought. By the way Basho wrote this haiku at the so called 'mountain temple' in Yamagata. Yamagata was one of the places which Basho eagerly would visit on his 'Narrow Road'
Ah! that sound
the song of a Nightingale
deepens the silence
Isn't it a nice one? I love the Nightingale's song and love to write haiku about it. I have written several haiku with the Nightingale in it. For example the following one:
an old temple
shelter for the night -
a Nightingale sings
It's a haiku I have written in 'My Narrow Road'.
A weblog about Matsuo Basho, a haiku master, and his haiku. On this weblog you can read several items about Basho's haiku and in every item I (Chèvrefeuille, a haiku poet) will write an own haiku inspired on the one by Basho.
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Monday, January 9, 2012
Basho Revisited, such stillness
Posted by Chèvrefeuille at 1/09/2012 12:29:00 PM
Labels: Basho, haibun, haiku, nightingale, oku no hosomichi
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