In this series I have used a haiku by Basho in the episode orchid fragrance which he wrote for a woman named Butterfly when he was asked for.
ran no ka ya cho no tusubasa ni takimono su
from the butterfly's wings
scenting the clothes
In that episode I didn't gave a new haiku, but an old one that I once wrote for a friend. So I will write a new haiku right now inspired by the above one.
in the Buddleia
fluttering of fragile wings
waving on the wind
waving on the wind
butterflies resting in the sun
on the Buddleia
|Credits: Butterfly on the Buddleia|
cho no ha no ikutabi koyuru hei no yane
wings of a butterfly
how many times do they flutter
over roof and wall
kimi ya cho ware ya Soji ga yume gokoro
you are butterfly?
I am Chuang-tzu's
Chuang-tzu is a well known classical author of China and Basho wrote this one for one of his friends named Dosui who was an enthusiastic reader of Chuang-tzu's work. According to Jane Reichhold however this one is an unconfirmed haiku by Basho.
Another butterfly haiku:
cho mo ki te su wo suu kiku no namasu kana
a butterfly also comes
to sip the vinegar from mums (*)
(*) mums is short for Chrysanthemums
|Credits: Butterfly on Chrysanthemum|
With this one came a preface: 'While I was staying in Awazu, a man who liked tea ceremony very much, invited me and served vinegar boiled chrysanthemum flowers picked from a nearby beach'. He wrote this one for his host, a physician.
okiyo okiyo waga tomo ni se n nuru ko cho
wake up wake up
I want you for a friend
This one is discussed by several authorities and they came to the conclusion that this one must be seen in relationship to the famous story of Chuang-tzu who dreamed he was a butterfly and then wondered which was real, his dream or his life as a human. (Source: Jane Reichhold's Old Pond: Basho's (almost) thousand haiku).
Others say that this haiku refers to one of Basho's (male) lovers. The truth will stay in the middle I think.
A last example of haiku on butterflies by Basho:
cho no tobu bakari nonaka no hikage kana
a butterfly flies
only in the field
What an awesome picture. A tiny butterfly dances in the wide field in the light of the sun.
Because I love the butterfly haiku by Basho. I will give another example. This is an impromptu verse.
monozuki ya niowa nu kasa ni tomaru cho
on grass without fragrance
perches a butterfly
Well ... I rest my case :-) All wonderful haiku by Basho about butterflies. To write myself a new one in the Spirit of Basho will not be easy, but ... I have to do what I have to do.
the cobweb scattered
by the fluttering of wings
a blue butterfly
on the verandah
a yellowish butterfly
the light of sun down
Butterflies ... I love those tiny creatures, so fragile and yet so strong. I bow my head and thank the Gods for the butterflies.
Sincerely, 'till next time.
Haiku my Heart
Thanks for passing by :-)
Breathtaking picture of the butterfly. I too am very fond of the butterfly, not only for its beauty but also for its symbol of renewed life!!! Thank you! CathyReplyDelete
Awesome photos ~ wonderful haiku and most informative post ~ Basho haiku quite 'over the top' ~ you do well to compete with Basho ~ I am still learning and reading about haiku ~namaste, carol (A Creative Harbor) Happy HMHReplyDelete
wow, Wow, WOW!ReplyDelete
All of it so beautiful♥♥♥
you are a treasure trove of haiku and butterflies.ReplyDelete
thank you for such tangible grace.
Thanks! You all make me blush ... and proud on who I am, just a humble haiku poet.ReplyDelete
I do like how you take your inspiration from the haiku masters and give your own twist to the words. Keep writing!ReplyDelete
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Thank you so much Magical Mystical Teacher for these nice words. I love the haiku by the classical masters, but Basho is for me the best.Delete
I can only hope to become as good as Basho. My inspirational haiku on the ones by Basho are just ... humbly written and I hope to write them in the Spirit of Basho.
What a wonderful blog you have here . All of your haiku impresses me so. Thank you for sharing your talent with us.ReplyDelete
You make me blush Ellecee. I love the haiku by Basho and he is a real inspiration to me. Thank you for visiting.Delete