So let's do this:
as bitten by a Black Mamba -awesome sunset
The Black Mamba is one of the most poisonous snakes on Mother Earth's surface. One bit of his teeth will paralyze you in seconds of time and can be your death.
In our country we have what we call 'Adder' and I think in English you call it a Viper and the 'Ratelslang' or Ratle snake who are poisonous, but not as poisonous as the Black Mamba.
This haiku is a classical one, but the season isn't well caught in this one, maybe Summer, maybe Spring as I would say according to the awesome sunset.
Again the deeper meaning is laying in nature and the care we have to take for Mother Earth. As we have to watch out for the Black Mamba, we can see also the awesome sunset. The danger and the beauty of Mother Earth.
Well ... see you next week when the theme for Tackle It Tuesday shall be Aleph.
After reading your back-to-basic haiku, I understand more of what you described as classical haiku...the seasonal and nature references...thanxReplyDelete